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Forgotten Warrior: Lionblaze and Squirrelflight

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Scene from the forgotten warrior... ^^
(Ihonestlyhatethispicture*shot*)

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"Lionblaze tensed, digging his claws into the ground. He knew what he wanted to say, but the words seemed stuck in his throat like a hard piece of fresh-kill, and were just as difficult to dislodge. 'You were a good mother,' he admitted at last, thinking longingly of the time they had been young, when he and his littermates had believed that Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw were really their parents. the tension in his shoulders relaxed as he let go of the long-held grudge."
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

HGood parts:
Shading is awesome!! Good work on that
sitting positions
Background- love the detail!!
Tails-hips - paws something stout them just is super good!! Keep that up!

Claw marks: such a little detail makes it so cute!!
Things to work on :
sholders:little wider would be better
mouths: could it be a little smaller or fangs? Theres no teeth!
eyes; just make the eyes more bold: try sharpening the edges.
fur: it looks a little scraggaly try and make it in bigger chunks
Back paws: if the front paws claws are unsheathed ...how can theses have no claws?

Overall great work!! I cant wait till next time! My favorite part was the lower body : the hips thighs paws and such, great job on that! My least favorute part was lionblazes eyes and mouth: try sharpening them a little)