Edit//FFF-- I FORGOT THE ADOPTABLE FORM XD
Name: Hannah Somebodyillthinkofalastnamelater
Age: uhhh... 17? xD
Gender: Female, obviously. : D//
Because for some reason just about every drawing of people I do is titled with a name. |D
SO THIS IS HANNAH MKAY
although she could totally be a Heather cus she looks like a human Heatherbreeze. 8I ....
ANYWHO
Embur and I are trying to win these adopts and all |D
[link] ^^^^^ I'm competing for #2 and she's competing for #3 ;w;
I hope I get to keep her ;w; she was fun to draw : D
ALTHOUGH HER POSE WAS LIKE ;ASLKDFJLSDKJ

ahem. : D
Hannah: (c) hopefully me LOL
Art: (c) Me c:
First off, it's a lovely picture<3 The hair is so detailed and it looks almost realistic. x3
The rose in the background could be a little more defined or sharper-- I think you were trying to go for a kind of smokey look with that, but it's kind of hard to see what it is. I kind of feel like it's not fitting the color scheme, so maybe it could be a little less dull?
Her bent arm looks a little short and kind of misplaced, and I believe her thumb's supposed to be on the other side of her hand. x3
The other things that are bothering me are her neck and the eyes. The neck looks a little thick to me, and the eyes appear to be a little too far apart~
Everything else is fantastic, though<3 Amazing job.
Anyway, lets start with the main character.
I really love the way you did the hair. It looks so real with every strand and the twirls were well done too. I tried drawing an Elizabeth Midford and lets just say it is far inferior to your style of hair.
Her arm seems a little misplaces but that does not take away from the photo at all!
Her clothes are like :aljudgfluiyareghjabglurdfh;g they are soo nice!! I would love to wear clothes like that
and theee background. Like the picture you made: +mist+
It is very well done.
I think i see blood dripping on that purple rose :3
In conclusion,
Very good picture and would like to see more humans ^_^
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