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Edit//FFF-- I FORGOT THE ADOPTABLE FORM XD
Name: Hannah Somebodyillthinkofalastnamelater
Age: uhhh... 17? xD
Gender: Female, obviously. : D//

Because for some reason just about every drawing of people I do is titled with a name. |D
SO THIS IS HANNAH MKAY
although she could totally be a Heather cus she looks like a human Heatherbreeze. 8I ....
ANYWHO
Embur and I are trying to win these adopts and all |D
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^^^^^ I'm competing for #2 and she's competing for #3 ;w;
I hope I get to keep her ;w; she was fun to draw : D
ALTHOUGH HER POSE WAS LIKE ;ASLKDFJLSDKJ :icontableflipplz:
ahem. : D

Hannah: (c) hopefully me LOL
Art: (c) Me c:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Okay, my first critique, so bear with me. xD

First off, it's a lovely picture<3 The hair is so detailed and it looks almost realistic. x3

The rose in the background could be a little more defined or sharper-- I think you were trying to go for a kind of smokey look with that, but it's kind of hard to see what it is. I kind of feel like it's not fitting the color scheme, so maybe it could be a little less dull?

Her bent arm looks a little short and kind of misplaced, and I believe her thumb's supposed to be on the other side of her hand. x3

The other things that are bothering me are her neck and the eyes. The neck looks a little thick to me, and the eyes appear to be a little too far apart~

Everything else is fantastic, though<3 Amazing job.