****SPOILERS FOR LONG SHADOWS AND SUNRISE**** . . Decorating lame titles likeaboss. Death of Ashfur. : D because everyone's already drawn this. More warriors fanart, why not. xD Will put a warning if anyone's offended. |D Sort of a re-do of this: ... that's it. *shuts up and goes back to commissions*
This is my third\forth critique for you and I will put down my honest opinion... I don't like it.... I LOVE IT!!!! XD The highlighting is well done and the smudging on Ashfur's neck is just splendid Perhaps you should have put water droplets splashing but that doesn't matter. Hollyleaf's expression is as if he had deserved the judgement she had given him. She seems proud. >:3 The background is blurred which is a good thing because then people can be able to focus on the cats rather then the scenery in the background She has good detail in her eyes and I can tell you have improved your style
It's great I love it!!! But, the gray cat's neck fur with all the blood... needs more detail I guess. I really do love it! You really are LIKE A BOSS!!! I like how the background is blurred out but, I think maybe it could have just a little tiny winy bit more detail... But, i think I should have had my back-pack because I just got schooled!!! L.O.L. You're art looks great other than those two little things! Oh, maybe you could have the cats popping more out? I really do love your art. Please keep on drawing, like a boss!
The highlighting is well done and the smudging on Ashfur's neck is just splendid
Perhaps you should have put water droplets splashing but that doesn't matter.
Hollyleaf's expression is as if he had deserved the judgement she had given him. She seems proud. >:3
The background is blurred which is a good thing because then people can be able to focus on the cats rather then the scenery in the background
She has good detail in her eyes and I can tell you have improved your style
Excellent job, America!!
Sincerely,
Canada >_<
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