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Ashes, Ashes, We All Fall Down (2)

Published: Jul 17, 2012

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REMAKE OF THIS XDDD TROLOLOL
MADE IT A YEAR, A WEEK, AND TWO DAYS AGO XD

Hope you like it guyyyyyyys~
Ashfur and Squirreflight and the fire and all of that good crap. : D
So yeah. Spoilers for Long Shadows. xD *totally wasn't too late to put that warning there*

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x-Spottypath-x

Jul 18, 2012

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_{Well, since I love this piece so much, I shall write a critique! x3

Okay, let's start with the pros!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> I love Ashfur's paw sitting on the rock. I can never draw paws that good! xD
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> Squirrelflight's teeth.... EPICNESS! I love how you did it! I can never draw cat teeth correctly! xD
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/>I love how you did the fire! Looks so realistic, unlike my fire. xD
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> Okai, last one. :3 I love how you made the fire make a kind of "glowing" effect on the cats. It totally makes it look so much better! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Okay, on to the cons....

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/> I don't know if it's just me, but I think Ashfur's expression should be like.... GRRRRR (xD) or at least glaring at Squirrelflight. He looks.... calm....

That's all I could find! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>}